Re: [請益] 請問這樣口說的內容會不會太少

看板TOEFL_iBT (TOEFL_iBT托福)作者Iknow ( )時間17年前 (2008/12/09 10:47)推噓2(2推 0噓 1→)

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※ 引述《econometric (計量天使)》之銘言： 1. I think...句型用太多；多用形容詞形容就好。 2. example的敘述太少而且不夠detail 拉長example的同時也可以把你的回答變長一些。這樣的回答太簡潔了。 3. 建議上網找HP的書評或簡介，直接學裡面的用法最快也最好。　 amazon應該兩個都有。 4. 文法錯有點多要小心。 : Well, Harry Potter is an interesting book I have read. 我覺得可以改一下， Harry Potter is my favorite novel. 就ok了。大不了前面加一句 I love to read fantasy fictions, and ... of all. : This article is about the fantasy series. article是指文章或論文。可以用novel, fiction或直接用story, book比較好。我建議用story。受詞也怪怪的，翻成中文是：這個文章是形容一個奇幻小說系列。不大懂.. 而且敘述有點太少。你可以說它敘述一個正邪對抗的魔法世界。 : And there are 2 reasons why I think it interesting. : First of all, it is full of imagination. : For example, Harry Potter can study magic in school with his friends : and he can use magic power to fly in the sky. 像這句就是沒有錯但念起來不大順的那種... 你可以直接形容HP用他的魔法掃把飛行.. : Also, this story is very adventureful. : For example, that Harry Potter fights evil wizard Lord Voldermort : is very exciting. that要去掉；然後主詞應該是the (magic) fight between HP and Voldermort : That's reasons why I think Horry Potter is very interesting. These are the reasons why... 我沒有很細的全部挑過去.. 只有抓幾個錯比較明顯的而已.. -- 而且我沒有看過哈利跌倒.. 所以幫不上什麼忙XDDD -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 123.193.33.52